UNTIL YOU by Hurri Cosmos
Until You by Hurri Cosmos
Reviewed by: Nannette
Asher Madden’s brother Ryker is in the hospital. Ryker has been roughed up because of a gambling debt he can’t pay. Max Tyler owns the club Asher works at, and he wants Asher. Asher likes Tyler too, but the club manager, Neil Griffin, wants Tyler for himself. The men who put Ryker in the hospital want the money Ryker owes them and they want information on Tyler as well. Asher can get them both. With a little luck, Asher will stay alive and get the man he wants.
There were several aspects of Until You that just didn’t work for me. The club that Asher works at has an overwhelming number of patrons who attack and/or fondle and/or aggressively proposition the waiters, mostly Asher, which causes some of the other waiters to be jealous of him. Asher himself is a bit wishy-washy. His boss is jealous too and tries to get back at Asher because he’s so beautiful, and he wants Tyler back. And Tyler is abusive and kind of a jerk. The dialogue is a bit immature, and the story is contrived at times. Unfortunately, Until You tries too hard to get somewhere and falls short at every turn.