WHEN YOU SUBMIT by Beth Kery
When You Submit by Beth Kery
When I’m With You, Part Five
Reviewed by Nannette
Elise and Lucien have reached a precipice in their relationship. Elise is learning more about herself and how to please Lucien but little about the secrets Lucien is harboring. Those secrets could destroy their future together.
When You Submit is my favorite story (so far) in this serial. Yes, the sex is hotter and kinkier, but the emotional connection between Lucian and Elise is intensifying as well. Elise is more than a pretty face. She’s a hard worker, and her restaurant idea is amazing. Lucien recognizes that too now. It’s relief to see them connecting more. Elise is really vulnerable. Lucien demands that Elise give herself to him in every way while he remains an enigma to her. Elise recognizes now that she pushes Lucien, and that she does it because she wants him desperately. Her erotic self-discipline lessons teach them both a few things, but Lucien still feel the need to keep her in the dark about his past and his interest in his friend Ian Noble.